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Currently the public has paid great attention to the the debate concering whether it is important or not to have advertising on television.Taking all the favoritable and unfavoritable aspects into account,I stand firmly on the side that we can get much benifit from adversing on television.The point of perspective,I believe ,shared by the largest proportion of the public,can be explained in the following reasons. Firstly,with the develop of the world,advertising full of all kinds of information is not only broden our eyes but also increase the econmic. Secondly, From what have mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that advertisements on television
