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Kate wants to live in a better environment, less pollution, with birds singing and sweet flower smelling. Mary wishes to fly to Hong kong someday because she thought Hong kong is the great place for variety of goods. Mike likes to play online games so his dreams is to be able to study English and Geography from those interesting online educational games. I like to travel periodically, my dream is that I can study or work abroad in developed country. I dream of to be a good professional in computer software and work in most excited and innovation projects in the world.