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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦19:我的梦想

发布时间:2014-07-03 17:58浏览次数:1188
要求:
习近平总书记在十二届全国人大一次会议闭幕会上描绘了“中国梦”的蓝图,上周一班会课我们班就“我的梦想”进行了一次热烈的讨论,学生们发表了各自的看法。
Tom
健康的饮食, 多运动,有强健的体魄来…
Kate
环境好,污染少,生活在一个鸟语花香的世界,…
Mary
有一天能乘飞机去香港旅游,因为香港是购物天堂,…
Millie
有足够的时间玩自己最喜欢的教育游戏,在玩的同时学习英语和地理…
你自己

要求:1. 要点齐全,可适当增加细节使句子通顺、连贯。
2. 最后一点要展开合理的想象,不少于2点。

3. 词数80左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。


My dream
Everyone may have his own dream. Someone may want to be rich, someone may want to be beautiful, and someone may want to have power. Last Monday, we had a warm discussion about this topic at the class meeting. Here are different opinions. ________________________________________________________
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When thinking of these things, we realize that we are full of life and hope.
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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;文章层次较为清晰;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;请注意分段。

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Kate wants to live in a better environment, less pollution, with birds singing and sweet flower smelling. Mary wishes to fly to Hong kong someday because she thought Hong kong is the great place for variety of goods. Mike likes to play online games so his dreams is to be able to study English and Geography from those interesting online educational games. I like to travel periodically, my dream is that I can study or work abroad in developed country. I dream of to be a good professional in computer software and work in most excited and innovation projects in the world.

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