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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦19:我的梦想

发布时间:2014-07-03 17:58浏览次数:1185
要求:
习近平总书记在十二届全国人大一次会议闭幕会上描绘了“中国梦”的蓝图,上周一班会课我们班就“我的梦想”进行了一次热烈的讨论,学生们发表了各自的看法。
Tom
健康的饮食, 多运动,有强健的体魄来…
Kate
环境好,污染少,生活在一个鸟语花香的世界,…
Mary
有一天能乘飞机去香港旅游,因为香港是购物天堂,…
Millie
有足够的时间玩自己最喜欢的教育游戏,在玩的同时学习英语和地理…
你自己

要求:1. 要点齐全,可适当增加细节使句子通顺、连贯。
2. 最后一点要展开合理的想象,不少于2点。

3. 词数80左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。


My dream
Everyone may have his own dream. Someone may want to be rich, someone may want to be beautiful, and someone may want to have power. Last Monday, we had a warm discussion about this topic at the class meeting. Here are different opinions. ________________________________________________________
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When thinking of these things, we realize that we are full of life and hope.
用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
评语:

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

The changing role of men in the kitchen Nowadays, the role of man in the kitchen is undergoing significant changes. Ten years ago, in my impression, women are busing in the kitchen all the time when the home to the guest or for weddings, funerals and ancestor worship and other major issues. It was very normal that a wife was doing things such as cooking and washing the dishes in the kitchen while her husband was smoking and drinking with guests in the living room. It can be said that a lot of time in a woman's life is spent on highly relevant affairs with kitchen life. Today, however, this situation is changing quietly. Men are gradually bearing the dribs and drabs in the kitchen while they have the responsibility in earn money to feed their families. It's not hard to see that the men are busing figure in someone's kitchen which some men even undertake all affairs in the kitchen. Among these men, some miserable, some work hard, some willingly. But no matter how, this is an indisputable fact that the men stay away from the kitchen is gradually far away.

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