3. 词数80左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。
The changing role of men in the kitchen Nowadays, the role of man in the kitchen is undergoing significant changes. Ten years ago, in my impression, women are busing in the kitchen all the time when the home to the guest or for weddings, funerals and ancestor worship and other major issues. It was very normal that a wife was doing things such as cooking and washing the dishes in the kitchen while her husband was smoking and drinking with guests in the living room. It can be said that a lot of time in a woman's life is spent on highly relevant affairs with kitchen life. Today, however, this situation is changing quietly. Men are gradually bearing the dribs and drabs in the kitchen while they have the responsibility in earn money to feed their families. It's not hard to see that the men are busing figure in someone's kitchen which some men even undertake all affairs in the kitchen. Among these men, some miserable, some work hard, some willingly. But no matter how, this is an indisputable fact that the men stay away from the kitchen is gradually far away.