2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Chong Qing is my favourte city,and it very beautiful,too.Expecially,at night,the night view is good,there are a lot of colours of light,such as,red,yellow,green,blue and so on.The foods are very beautiful,too.The Hot Pot is my food,it can makes my body hot when I eat it.There are some hot heart people,they will very happy to help you when you need a hand,so the people is very beautiful.The city has many parks,so you can see many trees,the eniverment is very beautiful. Chong Qing has many other beautiful things,and you can find if you come here.