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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33574
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Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

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词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加从句的使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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How I look? As we all know, people’s view on beauty are various. However, what is beauty? I think that no one could come up with the right answer. Women and men often have different ideas about what’s beauty and have different ways of expressing. Women generally don’t think themselves as a looker. No matter how attractive a woman may appear to be to others, no matter how many people was complement her on her appear, when she looks at herself in the mirror alone, she thinks, “not good enough.” Women care about how they look a lot. But most men, to the best of my knowledge, for the most part think of themselves as average-looking and they are rarely caring about how they look. However, why on the earth women and men have so great differences on how they look. As far as I’m concerned, there are many complex psychological and social reasons. Recently, I got an opinion of it from a writer who thought that “Barbie” plays a significant role on this, because most girls grow up playing with a beautiful doll and they grow up wanting to become a lady as beautiful as a Barbie. That is difficult to live up to, but girls tried their best to reach. On the contrary, most of the action figures that boys played with when he was little were hideous-looking. As a result, women and men have different attitude on how they look, and have different ideas about what is beauty. There are many things showing the different degree of how women and men care about their looks. For most women, if they prepared to have a date with someone they would take a whole day long to dress up themselves so that they can show up with a perfect look. Nevertheless, men would never take so many times to make them look better, they generally think that it is a waste of time, only a man who came down with psychosis would do things like this. So, it’s easy to find that every time since prepared to go out mothers are bound to take a long time to dress up, and fathers must urge them to dress up faster. Most men do not like to dress up themselves. Even though they have to take a lot of time to waiting for his wife they would never use the time to make themselves look better. On our daily life, we can be frequently hear that woman ask to people around her the question “how I look?”, while we can be rarely to hear that a man asked the question to people around him. In my opinion, there are three main reasons why women ask the question “how I look”. The first reason might be they grow up with a beautiful doll, and they want to be a pretty lady like a beautiful doll. The second is likely being that woman is never so confident like most men, so they constantly pursue to become more beautiful. The third reason is that some outdated concepts thought women must be to please men, so they have to dress up themselves.

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