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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8998
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分65.0分
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简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

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The Impact Of The Imformation We are living in a world which is fulled of imformation.Infotmanion is of great important to any of us.As the saying goes:"A weath of information creates a poverty of attention."It is to said that a value information can bring to us something we really want to get.To another word a wealth information can bring you poverty.For instant,a value information of business can bring you wealthy. However,there are many information which distract us around the world.How can we avioid being distracted by them?First of all,knowledge is the most powerfull tool for us to find out the imformation which is usefullless for us.More over,don't believe the strgentger,you may get chert from them.Finily,read more news is also good fou you to avoid the distracr information. From what has been discussed above,we may safely draw the conclusion that information has

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