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文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；能够使用一些不错的从句；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。
since reforming and opening,the economy of china has developed greatly,with more money in their wallet.rich as our country is,our quality of life is by no means satisfactory,because people spendind more money on buying goods which is on excessive packaging. why will appear this phenomenon,the reasons for this are as follows.first,on excessive packaging is a good way to sold by store.second,everyone is love beatiful things,so beatiful is goods that people is prefer to buy it.third,some people have a wrong ideal,they are belive that the more beatiful the package looks,the more quality of the goods. in my opinon, excessive packaging is not only deceive people,but also is harmful to our environment.therefore,the government should be realize the promble and take measures to limit it.
