题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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Among all the highlighted topic,there is "How to maintain trust?",Everyone has his or her own opinon. As the saying has it,"It takes years to build trust, and e few seconds to destroy it ", I can agree any more . In modern society ,the decline in trust is becoming more and more severe. For example ,we are afraid of helping the old people, because some people want to help the old people who fell and get hurt. when he was taken to the hospital, his family forced the man to pay the medical fee .Through these events , some people getted benefits to hurt most . We loss to be a good man chanance .What a sad picture! It is generally believed that trust in a society is easy to destroy but hard to establish .In order to reestablish trust ,we can do much.First ,we should believe others.Second , we ourselves should be trustworthy .Finally , our goverment should encourge honesty and punish dishonesty . In a word,if there is a way to make our social meaningful,it should be to exit trust. Only this way can we keep our passion throughout our life.