2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Since reforming and opening,the economy of china has developed greatly,with more money in their wallet.Rich as our country is,our quality of life is by no means satisfactory,because people spending more money in buying goods which is on excessive packaging. Why will be appearing this phenomenon,the reasons for this are as follows.First,on excessive packaging thing is a good way to sold by the stores.Second,everyone is love beautiful things,so beautiful is goods that people more like to buy it.third,some people have a wrong ideal,they are belive that the more beatiful the package looks,the more quality of the goods. In my opinion, excessive packaging is not only deceive people,but also is harmful to our environment.therefore,the government should be realized the problems and taken measures to limit it.