2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。

The picture express some problems about unemployment rates.it has two sides about event.look at the picture ,we know percent of unemployment rate in 2011.we also know median weekly earnings in 2011.education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates.we should thinking about this event.I have some advices to solve this problem.