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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似,简历一般包括个人情况,教育背景,个人能力,目标职业等信息。在写简历时,一定要实事求是,不可夸大其词,要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外,还要注意简历的格式和语言,格式要整齐明了,语言要简洁有力。
作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次较为清晰。
Resume Name:Li Ming Sex: Male Date of birth: Jun 15, 1986 Marital status:non-married Job objective: Foreign trade clerk Education background: Graduated from English Department of Northern University on July 2008. Personal skills: All subjects are gorgeous especially in English. The second foreign language is Germany that can be used basically in intercourse. Additionally, I am familiar with the process of foreign trade. Hobbies: Playing basketball, singing, watching film.