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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17431
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
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能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;采用了一些简单的从句。

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there is a famous saying goes "the real danger is not that the computer will begin to think like man,but that man will begin to think like the computer" to which,i can't agree more.It implicitly reveals that man solve lots of problem without kindness and happiness. more and more violence happened in the society because of lack of love and communication.They are cold-blood like the computer.Although the computer has strong power to deal with all kinds of problems.we should maintain the traditional way to solve problem.It's necessary for everybody to maintain the love between humans rather than the connection with computer.please be a man not a machine. In a word,we should protect us from being computer just like a severly cold machine,please be a hot people.

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