有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;可将文中部分短句合并为长句,注意文中句子错误;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,学术词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。
in morden life,a great number of people draw conclusions immediately after hearing or watching something.as can be seen,make a decision without thinking do a lot harm to other people and even us. firstiy,what you hear or see can be an error.for example,a rumour.the rumour which said that eating a lot of sault can protect us from nuclear radiation leaded to the that many people ,regardless of age,buying kilos sault.obviously,the rumour is unbelieveable,but many people were still by it because of thinking less and do more. secondly,we may misunderstand other people‘s meaning if we
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