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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4562
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
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作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足;作者能较多样地使用词汇,学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

Internet is one of the most important invention of 21st century.A lot of instant communication softwares are developed to shorten the distance between people.So many people deem the internet has a positive impact on interperson.People could have a communication with others all around the world. However,just as a proverb goes,"Every coin has two sides",the others have the opposite opinion..With the quickening pace of modern life and the fierce competition of society,people in expanding numbers fell a sense of indifference,caused by a lack of communication and social interaction.Lots of teenagers are addicted to internet games and seldomly communicate with their parents or neighborhoods.And the majority of people only see a film with the internet instead of interaction in holiday. In my opinion,I deem the internet is a double-edged sword.If someone have a great aim and ideal,the internet will have a contribution to his interperson.However,If someone couldn't set up a right goal,maybe the internet will have a negative effect on it.

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