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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40870
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分84.0分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用。

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With the development of modern society, many new things begin to show up, such as the internet and new technology, which caused the eruption of new words. And China, a developing country, lacks words referring to so many foreign words, so it has to use foreign words directly. Some people say it can cause the mistake of comprehension of the Chinese language and it is necessary to purify the Chinese language at present, but I don’t think so. First of all, we can’t refuse the new technology because we need it to help us catch up with developed countries, and it is certain that we don’t have specific names to name them. If we purify the Chinese language, we may use long words to describe foreign things and I believe this can make it more complex when we talk. Secondly, in my opinion, it is unnecessary to worry about this phenomenon, on the one hand, look back on history, there have been so many cultures absorbed by China, and it doesn’t matter. On the other hand, it just a matter of time that Chinese people can come up with perfect translations. In conclusion, I don’t think it’s necessary to purify the Chinese language at present, and all we need is some time.

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