2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(31):助人为乐

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I watched a rdeio which was about someone helped a baggar.The person first pertended a baggar who asked for some people to give him food, but none of them to do it. In the end, he bought a pizza to a baggar who had ate few days. when the baggar was eating, then the man pertend to ask for the baggar to give smething to him and the baggar gave him quickly. In the end, the person who gave him meony to the baggar and went away, the baggar's tear flowed down in his face. The story told us that should give fevour to help people who need to help.