4. 参考词汇:自主招生 independent recruitment
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I am 18 years old and I like to trave everywere. I have been to Australia. there was a amuzing contry which people were very polite and envirement was fleash and clear. I want to work there so I work hardly to catch my dream. I am outgoing boy and I am a baseball team of leader. I usually get up early to sport for half an hour before go to school. I usually get A at the each subject. If someone asked me how to study, I just told them enjoy it and find out what kind of way you are suitable.