2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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How Should Parents Help Children to Be independent Now,In China,There are many usual phenomena,Many children can't finish their things alone,But why are the phenomena appear?The reason is by the parents,Because parents do more for their sons or girls,Take more care of themselves even children needn't.With the growth of children,They cann't do things as alone as possible,Ths, Parents should help children to be independent,Should do less for them,Lead a correct indication for them.