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2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:08浏览次数:6642
要求:
题目 看图作文:旅程之“余”(题目自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160---200 words based on the following drawing
要求
1.Describe the drawing briefly
2.Explain its intended meaning

3.Give your comments

用户的作文(系统评分86.0分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

As is subtly portrayed in the cartoon, two tourists throw all their rubbish into the river, while enjoying their fantastic trip. Unfortunately, the surface of the river is littered with flow rubbish like cans, bottles, plastic bags, and so on. And below the drawing, there is a topic which says:“after”the travel. From the drawing, we can conclude that the painter wants to convey such a message: a good many scenic spots has been spoiled by some tourists. Why this problem facing around China scenic spots ? One the one hand, when holidays come, millions of people choose to travel around, which has bring the prosperous to travel industry. However, some negative effects on the environment have been ignore. One the other hand, tourism has exerted great pressure on the already overburdened environment. Moreover, some tourists are just lack of environmental awareness. Undoubtedly, we must fully aware of the seriousness of the problem. As a member of the world, we should take the responsibility of protecting the environmental in which we all live. It is high time that we enhanced people’s awareness, and hope that the problem will be solve through join efforts.

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