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拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨。
As is subtly portrayed in the cartoon, two tourists throw all their rubbish into the river, while enjoying their fantastic trip. Unfortunately, the surface of the river is littered with flow rubbish like cans, bottles, plastic bags, and so on. And below the drawing, there is a topic which says:“after”the travel. From the drawing, we can conclude that the painter wants to convey such a message: a good many scenic spots has been spoiled by some tourists. Why this problem facing around China scenic spots ? One the one hand, when holidays come, millions of people choose to travel around, which has bring the prosperous to travel industry. However, some negative effects on the environment have been ignore. One the other hand, tourism has exerted great pressure on the already overburdened environment. Moreover, some tourists are just lack of environmental awareness. Undoubtedly, we must fully aware of the seriousness of the problem. As a member of the world, we should take the responsibility of protecting the environmental in which we all live. It is high time that we enhanced people’s awareness, and hope that the problem will be solve through join efforts.