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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40875
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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Some people like to make a conclusion as soon as they see or hear something.No matter their conclusion proved to be right or wrong. The behavior itself is unwise. First and foremost,they can't tell if it is truth what they see or hear.It maybe a joke or something not true. Making a conclusion by such joke can only bring us a joke.Even if it's true,we still cannot make a conclusion.Because we know too little to make a conclusion about the whole thing. Most of the thing we know is consist of our imagination. We make it for granted that it must be what we thought.Last but not least ,a wrong conclusion will effect your thought after.People are always effected by their first impression,and it's not easy to change it. A wrong conclusion will effect you adjustment even bring you to the wrong way. In short, making a conclusion just by what you see or hear is definitely unwise.

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