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Tony,13 years old,Class 4,Grade 1,England,father, teacher,school,mother,
doctor,brother,driver,favorite,blue,vegetable文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
I'm Tony My name is Tony. I'm 13 years old. I come from England. Now I study in a school. I'm in Class 4, Grade 1. I have a happy family. My father is a teacher. He teaches in a school. My mother is a doctor. She works in a hospital. And my brother is a driver. I love them very much. my favorite color is blue and I like vegetables best. Do you want to make friends with me?
