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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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From: hubin@163.com Date: December 25th, 2008 To: KPOHsales@hotmail.com Subject: To extablish business relationship Dear Mr. KPOH, I was very interested in a new product which I had known about it coded 5670 in the period of exposition held in New York on 15-22 December. In view of further development of our company, the product will greatly contribute to our a new research field. We need a price list and instruction to consider whether we could set up a cooperation or not. If possible, we hope we can establish a long and firm business relationship. Yours Sincerely Hubing
