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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第33篇:学校是否应该让学生评估老师

发布时间:2013-08-14 17:00浏览次数:1428
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. 

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

学校是否应该让学生评估老师。不同的人持有不同的观点。

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A school is a integral educational institute which means every certain part would produce substantial adverse or beneficial effects on others inevitably.This kind of view of the world enlightens that it is essential to allow different parts to influence others and to strengthen the cohesion of a school through this way. First of all,we can figure it out easily that it can advance the teaching quality to ask the students to evaluate their teachers.Whether a education process is valid or not is not depending on the final examination's grade but the amount of acquisitions students grasp, and the latter is not measurable tangibly and only known by the students themselves.So as a result,it is necessary to enforce such policies. Nonetheless on the other hand,we cannot permit such test form to be the sole method to evaluate the ability of teachers.Because in our studying experiences,we would meet with few odd teachers who may not be welcomed by students but have significant research outcomes.

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