2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(28)写作:自我介绍

文中从句偏少，句子错误有点多了；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词；文中拼写错误比较多，同时请注意积累词汇量；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

hi l'm tony, 13 years old, l is 5{4} l'm from england . Class 4,Grade 1,England,father, teacher,school,mother, doctor,brother,driver,favorite,blue,vegetable f g h g cd g v vvvv v gv vg xc c v n k k j bn b h n m v dc bn m f f f f g h h h b b b b b bbb h n j j gh vfd g bb doctor,brother,driver,favorite,blue,vegetable l like blue and oreeg,l mum is housewife.l father is cook.