2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

结构良好，但是语言不流畅；句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；连词使用偏少。

Life in the city is very different from life in the villages and on the farms. People in large cities are much more careful to respect the privacy of the individual. Sometimes this feeling seems to be one of indifference, but it is a convention of city life to curb one‘s curiosity about the personal affairs of strangers. Villagers and farmers are likely to show a great deal of interest in all their neighbors. Opportunities for bright young people are greater in the cities and there has been a steady stream of hopeful jobseekers from the villages and farms to the large metropolitan areas.