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College years have prepared you for your future life How time flies!I am going to graduate from university and become new life.During the past three and half years,I have learned a lot of from my university.For example,I learn how to gain social experience;I know the importance of teamwork.However, more importantly,it is some necessary skills to be a good English teacher that I have learned at school. At first,I have acquired good English skills that prove I am quite competent to be an English teacher.Through learning writing,translation,grammer,reading,I have enhanced my English learning skills and passed qualification tests.With those qualification certificates,I am ready and able to fill this new role.moreover,learning more history of English countries is conductive to teach English.thus,what is all too evident to everyone is that good English skills will make me more confident to be a English teacher. In reality,as for teacher,eloquence is a basic capacity.And university is a wonderful place to exercise your communication.Therefore,I have cherished each time to chat with others,such as professers,classmates,and foreign teachers.I spend a lot of time on chatting. I talk with teachers during the recess;I chat with roommates before bedtime;I communicate with foreigners on the weekends.After long time,I know how to talk with differennt people,and which way is optimum to communicate with others. Last but not least,I have learned the necessity of responsibility. It is well know that teachers should handle young children and maybe organize some activities.In my university days,I have trained the sence of responsibility by joining clubs or student union.That help me know the importance of responsibility. In my university days,It is colourful that everyday life is exciting.I have learned some good English skills,communication and teamwore spirit.I do sure that all will help me in the future.