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2012年1月12日雅思写作真题:设立图书馆的好处

发布时间:2013-08-06 16:49浏览次数:4578
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【题目要求

Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others, however, believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

【题目讲解

这回试题难不倒烤鸭。冲突的焦点落在[有必要设立图书馆]或[没有必要],而不是单一的立场library PK Internet。在家使用因特网的好处太多,可是利用图书馆可以补足其功能complementary。

两个问题。引言3 sentences之后,1. 讨论二者的利弊,看中体的承段6 sentences与转6 sentences段。2. 考生提出看法,看合段的结论3 sentences。

起段引言 Introduction

开头第一句。申论主题:使用因特网可以取得各种资讯Vs.图书馆对大众有利。

开头第二句。集中焦点:冲突是两难自解。

开头第三句。一分为二:分头指引讨论二者利弊。

用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
评语:

作者词汇表达丰富多彩,但是要留意单词拼写;有效的运用了一些复杂句;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

In contemporary community,an increasing number of libraries are built in many metropolis.Some elderly people complain that their exercise isseus wil be blocked due to building a library in spare area.However many education experts claim that a new libaray can provide students with a occasion to do academic research.In my opinion,Building new library can has both positive or negative effects on our society. To start with,library has long been proved as the favourite place where students would like to stay when they are free.Pupils can enjoys its advanced facuilities which can contribute to thier learning on challenging courses.Besides,no one can deny that they will be more concentrate on what they are reading.There is an old saying goes that atomsphere can impact on someone,so peaceful air in the library can contribute to improve student's attention. In contrast,many commercial buildings develpoers think it would be a waste of soil resource if many spare square are going to be libraries.As it is frequently reported in mass media,people prefer to reading book at home and some technical experts also point out that with the increasing developing of Internet,people can enjoying reading classics on their living room's sofa without paying expensive cab fee.The importance of library of are going to be weaken. To sum up,It is universally acknowledged that people ought to own a place to reading varoius sorts of books like magazines,novels and fictions.No one can deny that it must be a tegradegy if our spiritual lives are replaced with economy issues.

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