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文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；作者词汇表达较丰富多样，学术词汇使用较熟练。
As the saying goes, it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.I cannot agree with it more.Apparently,if you put all your capital into the sole stock,the risk of failure will increase a lot.If the stock tumbles,you wii have enormous loss.However, if you buy some other stocks at the same time,though one declines,you may still get profits while the other stocks behave well. My father always educates me that I should develop comprohensively rather than concentrate on one aspect.Not only the cultural curriculums should be mastered well but also the other useful skills are supposed to take over,such as cooking,swimming,driving and so on.The competition of our society will be more and more intense,we should consider more prudent and take accurate actions to improve our abilities. In brief,we should not put all eggs in one basket.
