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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Dear George, We are interested in your product which is 5670 when we attended the Fair in London in Nov. 15-22. Could you sent its price list and instruction to me. We hope can establish busniess relationship. We are a big company which is imployed 700 people. Thanks for taking time to read it. Best Regards, Hubin
