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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；采用了一些简单的从句；连词使用偏少。
Dear George, This is Hubin from VILLAGE GIRL.I hope everything going well with your life and business. While we was attending the Fair in London in DOV. 15-22, we were very interested in your product which is called 5670, so could you please sent its price list and instruction to us, we hope can establish business relationship. Thank you for your kind attention and looking forward for your presence. Best Regards, Hubin
