题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
On maintaining trust There's a famous saying:" A friend in need is a friend indeed!" That's definitely right! But,things happen and you can not control them even a little bit.When you lose a game and you feel like you are a loser;When you fail an exam and you are the only one who dosn't make it through;When bad things happen to you,you want to turn to your brother,but he is not available!You feel like your world is so black that no longer will be sunshine there!You start to complain and then get apart from your best friend.If bad things happen to you and you act like these above,finally,you will be all alone! In fact,friends can not always be in need.Friends can not help you out of the blue everytime!When bad things happen to you,you have to trust your fiend that if he could help you,he would be there for you.When he could not be there for you,he would pray for you,hoping you that you would make it!You must trust your friend! Now let's go back to the topic. When you finally scceed in get yourself out of the darkness,you will see wherther your friend is trusted or not,because trust needs no maintaining!