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拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
As a saying go," It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket." What we can make of the quatation is the significant of leave a way out.However, there has been a heated discussion among people. Advocation proclaim that it is dangerous that force all attention on a mission, because if you make few mistakes what led to you fail directly, you will waste of time irrevocably. In addition, In the era of diversification you can do nothing but combine others production with yours.Only in this way can you smoothly achieve triumphant.However, others hold a adverse standpoint that only when you concentrate the strength in a specific thing can you finally attain successful. Otherwise, success for you is preventative. What's more, we can finish a job quickly when people put their attention on it. As far as I'm concerned, I think born side have respective merits, but my heard follow the former idea. I hold the views that not everything can we smoothly finish. When people suffer a stubborn problem, the best method, we need do something others rather than compel us own to finish it.
