2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；作者词汇基础扎实，注意文中极个别的拼写错误。

In recent years,the quality of life in the cities especially mega-cities has meet with a seriously rapid decline which means if we fail to solve such burning social problem immediately,the civilisation we have now would run into such point where we used to be decades ago.So what we can do is just to figure out the reasons and come up with the solutions. First of all,the limited urban sprawl is the most significant factor.As the economies of one country developed briskly within several years,the public utilities and conveniences did not keep pace with the extention of the cities.This phenomenon results in a serious of outcomes such as the inevitable traffic blockages,polluted atmosphere,rivers and seas,inedible poisonous food and beverage and so forth. To fix these up,we have to seek a balance between the economic advances and citizens' happiness.At first,it is essencial for the government to finance the construction of the public utilities such as the highway,expressway,colleges and so on.In the meantime,we have to spread proclamation to teach the average people how to live healthy.