2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I'm a girl,who loves traveling very much.As the age of 19 now ,I have been to many places of interest.While ,in my heart I think that my hometown is the most beautiful place .So I will introduce my hometown to my foregin friend ,Peter carefully. My hometown lies in kaixian county,Chongqing,the southwest of China.It's a legended place,which has plenty of tailors.There is a place called The cave of angel.It is named after a angel of lenged.Many years ago,in the cave lived a angel who's so beautiful that many men loved her.However,she falled in love with a strong and genlte man.They loved each so deeply until they pasted their all lives in the end.The cave has many pictures about the angel and the man she loved.There are also lots of seesights to visit.I believe that he must come to the place tohave a seeing meal and enjoy a good time.