小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.Her name is YaJie,she is eight years age.She has a black long hair .She is a happy girl.We like to watch TV, read a book, play computer games after doing our homework.We usually go shopping on Saturday and Sunday.We always go to school to learn in class。I think she is my good friend.And if we hope will always be good friends.