小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.Her name is YaJie,she is eight years age.She has a black long hair .She is a happy girl.But sometimes she also not happy. For example, let her to swim.We like to watch TV, read a book, play computer games after doing our homework.We usually go shopping on Saturday and Sunday.We always go to school to learn in class。When I am sad, I will think of her.So I think she is my good friend.And if we hope will always be good friends.