小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

I have a good friend. Her name is YaJie,she is eight years age. She has a long black hair and a pair of big eyes. She is a happy girl.Nonetheless sometimes she is not happy too. For example, let her swim.We like to watch TV, read a book, play computer games after doing our homework.We usually go shopping on Saturday and Sunday.We always walk to school。 When I am sad, I will think of her.So I think she is my good friend.And if we hope will always be good friends.