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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4562
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

Internet is one of the most important invention of 21st century.A lot of instant communication software are developed to shorten the distance between people.So many people deem the internet has a positive impact on interpersonal relationships.People could have a communication with others all around the world. However,just as a proverb goes,"Every coin has two sides",the others have the opposite opinion..With the quickening pace of modern life and the fierce competition of society,people in expanding numbers fell a sense of indifference,caused by a lack of communication and social interaction.Lots of teenagers are addicted to internet games and seldomly communicate with their parents and friends.And instead of interacting with others on holiday,the majority of people only see a film in the internet. In my opinion,I deem the internet is a double-edged sword.If someone have a great aim and ideal,the internet will have a contribution to his interperson.However,If someone couldn't set up a right goal,maybe the internet will have a negative effect on it.

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