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Nowadays, online shopping has form a very popular lifestyle in society. By online shopping, we can buy what we want to buy easily even if we never leave our home, such as food, clothes, furniture and so on. As a matter of fact, many people have adapted to this lifestyle even depend on it. Obviously,we can't deny the advantages of online shopping. Online shopping can not only show us more style of what we want to buy, but also save us our time that we can spend on housework, work or rest. Morever, online shopping can make us relaxed in some way. However, it may make some problem if online shopping take the place of normal shopping as a main shopping style. For one thing, quality is awalys an important disadvantage on online shopping. For another thing, normal shopping are facing a great challege so we may have a economic violence in the near future. As online shopping gets a popular lifestyle graduatly, we should do something useful to make our life safer. In my opinion, trying their best to get the customers' beliefe is the first thing they should do. Apart from this, keeping the quality of products is a key way.
