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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40892
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。

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Once, there was a tendency for me that I always judged a person by others remark. Such as when a man is said to have done a bad thing, I started to doubt him, even to abandon away from him. I argue that it is not just happened to me. We often come to a conclusion on impulse, without carefully thinking. Now, I know it is unwise to define anything only by other’s remark or one aspect we have seen. Why? For one thing, it will produce a profound effect on what we judged. For example, the man who is real kind but we regard him as a theif, which will cause considerable misunderstanding that will influence other's judgement. For another, we are easily to make mistakes by doing this. It is not only affect our individual but also the development of society. From what have discussed above, we can easily come to a summary . we are supposed to develop an article awareness and never do a harsh conclusion.

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