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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第44篇:你在读书看电影的时候学到了什么

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:22浏览次数:1992
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作文题目:

Movies and books can reflect the ideas and the spirit of a particular period. What have you learned about a place or its people from watching films or reading books?

Use specific examples and details to support your response.

电影和书本能够反映出一个特定时代的理念和灵魂。你在读书看电影的时候学到了什么?举出例子并作出解释。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分61.0分
评语:

词汇表达较灵活准确,学术词汇使用过少,另外注意文中个别的拼写错误;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Movies comes from the life but more ideal to reality and we usually can get someting special then add something to our life.I have ever saw a movies named Roman Holiday and gave me a deep impress because of Audrey Hepburn's smile like a angel smileing to me.The story is that a princess came to roman just for politics need.But been a long princess drop her tired and one night she escape from her apartment .Then she met a young journalist and in love with him but she realized her responsibility for her country. She decided to leave the journalist and continued her roman journey.After that she would came her country and she know they maybe never see each other. At the end of movies the princess smiled to the journalist and i touched at that time.She is so straight-out to life.Since that i know that never wish something special happening to you.Be honest to youself and assume your responsibility.The last but not least is smile to life and hug the life because life is a gift and you should not intend wasting it.

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