2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；用词丰富，学术词汇的积累还有很大提升的空间。

In the recent years, an increasingly number of people live in some developed cities of China choose to tour at home or abroad,espeacially at the period of holidays ruled by the government, such as 1st, May, mid-autumn or 1st,October. It is unsurprised to find that interesting resorts covered by a large population of tourists and certainly, there must have a terrible traffic ham. Many factors can contribute to the phenomenon. On the one hand, more and more people have a higher payment than before with the development of the economy of China. They would like to spend their money in imporving the level of lives and enriching their minds. On the other, the government intend to propel the GDP by the means of encouraging citizens to travel out the door. It is no doubt that the intention of tourism is to relax both of our bodies and minds, however, on the contrary, it usually make us feel more tired and uncomfortable because of expensive expenditure, heavy traffic jam and environmental polution.It is high time for government to take measures