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Internet is one of the most important invention of 21st century.A lot of instant communication software are developed to shorten the distance between people.So many people deem the internet has a positive impact on interpersonal relationships.People could have a communication with others all around the world. However,just as a proverb goes,"Every coin has two sides",the others have the opposite opinion..With the quickening pace of modern life and the fierce competition of society,people in expanding numbers fell a sense of indifference,caused by a lack of communication and social interaction.Lots of teenagers are addicted to internet games and seldomly communicate with their parents and friends.And instead of interacting with others on holiday,the majority of people only see a film via internet. In my opinion,I deem the internet is a double-edged sword.If someone have a great aim and ideal,the internet will have a contribution to his interperson.However,If someone couldn't set up a right goal,maybe the internet will have a negative effect on it.
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