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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
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作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Do you usually make decisions after thinking twice? What will you do if you are only given one minute to opt? Have you ever taken others advices? I think all of us have done those things I have mentioned above, which means maybe our choices will never be easy. Firstly, it is most people`s habit to think twice before any action. Since sometimes we may be hesitant between two options, what we will do is to pounder over the condition. For instance, when it is time for us to sumbit an application to some universities, even the most careless people will take times to muse about it. Sometimes we propably think we have talents in some field, however, after we become a student major in this subject we start to regret the original choice. Hence, that we will treat our option seriously is a habit which can prevent us from regreting. Secondly, it is our experience that helps us to make a judgment in a minute. Some people may think they always can get the whole picture in quite a short period of time. They view some things in a right aspect while that also means they have already experienced that thing. The one who do not know what is wating for him in front of him will never be confdent about his judgment. So every judgment we have already made depends on what we have experienced. It is not the time for us to try out luck but the chance to show our knowledge. Thirdly, in most conditions we will never be successful in guessing if we really do not know the situation we are in. When we are taking an examination, if we have not hit the book a week ago it is impossible for us to get high scores. By contrast if we are always boring our oil till midnight it is our lot to get straight A. So it is no use to be jealous of who are "smarter" than us. They must be the one who treat every thing seriously and try their best to approach problems. As an ancient Chinese proverb tells us,there is no meal of free charge. Hence, it is not reliable to depend on casting a coin to get the right answer. In conclusion, if we hope to find the right direction we can sometimes believe in snap judgements whilst if we always want to win we should never depend on judgment without having known the answer before.

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