Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅。
Internet Communication Nowadays, high-tech develop very quickly. Many people choose new ways to communicate, such as qq, chats, web, or SNS. Exspecies young people use it trains. As the new ways develop, the old ways would dash away. People write letter less than chat in the internet. May be it's not only a sign of social development, also convenient to people communication. Thus, people made friends in the internet should be careful. I think the electronic communication can replace the face-to-face contact. As the high-tech developing that electronic communication develop too. Now internet not only chats but also vision. Persons can see friends in the internet. More important that people should be carefully make friends in the internet!