高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown was used to around trees where had a confortable and fresh envirement When I was young, there had a several rivers through the country and had lots of fish. I always spent much time with my freinds near the river. And the contry's house were very sample and the street were narrow. But now the buildings has been constructing higher than before, kinds of cars acorss the noisy street and the envirement has became worst by technology developing.When I returned to my hometome that found the trees were gone and without any fish in the river.So the government should recovery the pollution as soon as possible.