2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇，在学术词汇方面希望能更熟练一些简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

man and computer We were born in a age when our robot technology were getting started . Computer is the core of it.We benefit a lot but we actually know little about it.I mean human beings invent computer but it can do so many things we can not ,calculating huge datum,drawing a splendid picture . nowadays, there are some rumors that one day computers will rule us.But in my opinion ,one day we will all think like a computer.Thats more horrible.But think we will totally rely on computer presently because of its amazing calculation capability.Soon or later ,we will agree upon that computer is superior to us .that the nature of humanity is to get themslef to be better will lead us to become a hunmanshape computer which is emotionless and only make decision based on date. We will lose our moral ,ethic and affection.what we left is just previous datum. we can make use of computer but wisely.we must presever our integrity and many other great merits .The decision we make base on that may not be the most profitable but the most humane