2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

We were born in age when our robot technology were getting started. Computer is the core of it.We benefit a lot but we actually know little about it.I mean human beings invent computer but it can do so many things we can not,calculating huge datum,drawing a splendid picture. Nowadays, there are some rumors that one day computers will rule us.But in my opinion,one day we will all think like a computer.That is more horrible.I think we will totally rely on computer presently because of its amazing calculation capability.Soon or later,we will agree upon that computer is superior to us.That the nature of humanity is to get themselves to be better will lead us to become a humanoid computer which is emotionless and only make decision based on the date. We will lose moral,ethic and affection.What we left is just previous datum. We can make use of computer but wisely.We must preserver our integrity and many other great merits.The decision we make base on that may not be the most profitable but the most humane.