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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8979
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

There is an old saying,talents are trying 99 percent add to crying 1 percent.As a matter of fact, I want to say that it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.Why can I say that? The main reasons are following. First of all,appearance belongs to everyone from we are born.So we can't change it.We should respect them.Secondly, lives of our are decides by us.Such as Ma Yun,he has disadvantage in his appearance.But he has a clever head, which made him gain achieve great success.Last but not least,god is fair, who closing a door and will open a window for you. In a conclusion,however they have different appearance, we should respect everyone.Only in this way can we get a happy life.We can communicate with each other much.

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