小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

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my holiday was fantastic. at the beginning of the holiday, i went to a museum to see a lot of exhibitions. it helped me to get a lot of knowledge. then, i went to the library. there are many books in it. i could find some unique books in it. at the last part of the holiday, i always went to the swimming pool. swim frequently is good for our health. and i do like swimming.